Olive

In this scene, I feel that my character is someone who has been a traumatic experience. I think that I want to show this by having her have outbursts, such as on the line "Don't go in there". I also think that she romantasises situations as a form of coping with her experience. For example, she describes the  falling mail from the plan crash as clouds. I think that Olive is someone who has never had anything really bad happen in her life, so this experience really threw her life through a loop. I don't think she lost anyone in the plane crash, but I think that the collision of the plane and the after math that she saw opened her eyes to the fact that bad things can occur on a drop of a hat. The crash acted as a reality check for her. I think that I can show these feeling in the dialogue by varing tonality and subtle yet important body and facial movements and expressions.